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Canon EOS 5D.

edited in Lightroom. I am currently without photoshop :(
 
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Avatar Daykan

 09/14/07 @816

Great work!!
Welcome to gfx!
 
Avatar OzanKarabulut

 09/14/07 @827

Nice work!! welcome!
 
Avatar moserArtist

 09/14/07 @838

Welcome to the madhouse of gfx! :)

O would crop off more from the bottom focusing closer onto the face.

Interesting with the branches which is a bit different from other regular poses.

Wish still that there were not distracting branches over your eye.

You look beautiful btw (but you knew that). :p
 
Avatar Daykan

 09/14/07 @847

yeah, Pat have reason, you´re really pretty!
 
Avatar Fraser

 09/14/07 @852

Welcome to GFX, hope you'll successfully improve your skills here ;)
Great first post, I like it a lot! the DOF is perfect! I would have cropped off the ear tho.. but that's a matter of taste. Agree with moser about the branches over the eye.
well done, keep shooting/posting

Philipp
 
Avatar Madanapale

 09/14/07 @876

Very good first submission!
Nice portrait!
Welcome to GFX!
Carlos
 
Avatar zaclab

 09/14/07 @905

Very good first submission!
I would like to see eye in the focus.
Agree with Fraser about cropping of the ear, that could improve composition.

Welcome to GFX! :)
 
Avatar closedistant

 09/14/07 @920

beautiful portrait, very beautiful
 
Avatar Cigaro

 09/14/07 @925

I think the crop is just perfect.
The branches are an excellent touch, the way their shapes are pointed organically upwards.
Hope to see more:)
 
Avatar Poohblah

 09/15/07 @063

the branches are great, it does not bother me that a couple cover the edge of the eye... if they were straight across the center of the pupil, it would be a problem.
 
Avatar ARZILLIER66

 09/15/07 @063

Nice portrait!
welcome to GFX!
 
Avatar oldskool87

 09/15/07 @365

agree with moser on the crop... still great first post :)

Welcome to GFX!
 
Avatar blackshad

 09/15/07 @440

welcome to gfx
i like the crop and the branches are an interesting idea but
i think it would look better with your face in perfect focus and with the branches more blurred than now :)
 
Avatar RvascoF

 09/17/07 @598

Great work...
Beatiful lighting and compo. (thumbup)
Agree about the branches over the eye....!!!
Welcome to GFX.......!!!!!
 
Zuhalll

 09/30/07 @973

Very interesting composition!!
+7/7
 
Avatar ThruMyEyez

 09/30/07 @449

I like the DOF and a great idea. I might crop this tighter at the bottom as I think your shoulder is a bit distracting. Very good work!
 
Avatar Zazill

 10/04/07 @434

Yeah what moser sayd ;) Well done very nice. :)
 
Avatar rsandagon

 10/05/07 @374

Simply great. I don't think you need to edit it in Photoshop further. It's beautiful as it is. You're a lovely subject as well. Enjoy!
 
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